Please Don't Die On Me

by CathyButterflyJC   May 14, 2012


Please Don't Die On Me

Please don't leave me
Don't you see this world
Is where you should be

I want you to be okay and not cry
And tears break down the borders behind my eyes
I'm scared you really will say goodbye

This world is so cruel
And your life is so full of hate
And it's like you're being tested by fate

I want you to know I'm always by your side
But now I realize they're so much you've come to hide
We told each other everything

But now I find out
That weed you can't live without
And you don't share all that it's about

You think you're fat
And I wish I could be
Where you're at

It's killing me
And all we use to be
As life stomps about you

You're no longer eating
Instead you continue cutting
And you love the stinging

I no longer hear you singing
Even the songs that pain is bringing
The hope you are continuously losing

You wish your life away
And I beg for you to stay
We pray you'll be okay

And I don't know what to say
You morn for another day
And think there is no way

I feel like such a fail
You cry until you feel ill
Let me carry you up life's hill

You cry all night
And life you fight
Blood through your skin takes flight

I pray for a light
To come upon you
Open your eyes to a happy sight

I remember when you screamed and cried
Then I didn't hear from you for a while
And I thought you had died

I was so scared
Prayed for so long
Hoping I was wrong

I remember when you cut so hard
You went too far
And blacked out

You thought you were died
And joy was in your head
You cut so hard with so much you bled

And I don't know what to do
I don't know how to help you
I don't know how to save you

I feel such as I'm nothing
Because I'm your best friend
But I can't save you from the end

I try to offend
I try to stand up for you
But you still wish for your life to end

Please don't die on me
There is so much you could be
I'll figure out a way to open up your eyes to see

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  • 12 years ago

    by Darclyfe

    Omg.. I like this and I understand the pain of this poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Max

    This was a v.good poem by you
    the rhyming was very good

    but in
    "I feel like such a fail
    You cry until you feel ill
    Let me carry you up the hill"
    hill felt forced as there is no trace for it in the poem.

    and in
    "I remember when you scream and cried
    Then I didn't hear from you for a while
    And I thought you had died"
    1st line 'scream' should be 'screamed'

    over all this is a perfect poem
    so emotional and so sad
    very well written
    5/5 keep writing =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Elizabeth

    This was..... just so... heart breaking!</3 but i LOVED it. your really good with ryhiming your words and putting words together to sound beautiful. wish i was this good(:

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    That's what a good friend is for. To stand by your side and help in any way. To open our eyes and see what's in front of us.
    People are very judgemental, you either to fat or thin, you are not pretty or popular
    enough, it can put a lot of pressure on somebody. A true friend don't care, that
    person loves you regardless