Willingly praying along...

I have missed your delightful poems but this one is special. Your talent is evolving and blossoming into a floral display of words..Excellent my friend

Excellent write 5/5

Hello :)
I really love the message here, and the fact that you placed this under 'love poems' (instead of life) shows praying is not just a part of life or routine, but it is something bigger.
Just some tweaks here and there, and this piece would truly shine at its best:

"Watching your silent praying"
I suggest: "Watching you silently praying"

"If you are making one quite pray
Please mention I want to stay"
Do you mean 'quiet' instead of quite?
I suggest you revise this to: "If you are making one quiet pray'r.."

"Crossing mind a breast with invisible lines"
abreast is one word :)

"Suddenly I feel a spirit lifting me
Seems right and right to be
I am praying with you, won't stop
Inside me a glow is building up"

Now that^^is beautifully written. You just captured that feeling that we feel when praying. Amazing job. Keep writing, sir
-X

"Even there is no voice
I don't dare make a noise"
I didn't really get what this line means.

"What are in your mind? (Should be What is on your mind?"
Is it peace you will find?"

"If you are making one quite pray
Please mention I want to stay"
This line is filled with emotion.

"Watching you(r) shining face
Recalling heavenly lace"

"Happiness is spreading I know
Your body shines with inner glow"
This line has great imagery:)

"During your praying the lips moves
I hope mind and body approves

Suddenly I feel a spirit lifting me
Seems right and right to be"
These two lines have great imagery as well.

"Praying with you is without shame
I hope we feel and hope for the same"
This had a lot of flow to it I can tell it came to you easily.

All together the imagery is great and good write:)

This is awesome Ole, what a beautiful
poem.