OH, my goodness.

I love this, this is so sweet and I wish I can write a better comment, but your words have touch me and I love the ending.

I cannot choose any line in specific, I like everything. I could feel the emotion all through.

"I'm filled with essence that can't be explain by science,"

^^^^
This is what this piece gives the reader.
Keep writing :)

Thanx for the comments. I'm sure with u guys comment I can be a better writer..