Comments : Crying,

  • 12 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Oh my goodness, I loved this, if I wasn't in still right now I would be crying like crazy, 100/100

  • 12 years ago

    by Darclyfe

    Thanks

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I can really relate to this poem alot know how you feel i'm crying of alot of thing's i'm tearing up now your poem is very touching :)

  • 12 years ago

    by JustAnotherPoet

    Love it! The honesty and genuine emotions it conveys... wow.

    On the inside I'm crying.
    On the outside I'm lying.

    This really gets to me. Most of the times, I spend my days smiling and pretending that all is fine when in actual fact my heart is bleeding. Nice poem!

  • 12 years ago

    by Darclyfe

    Omg, Someone noticed my message in those lines. :)