Loneliness is More So A Disease

Lonelioness is a disease are i feel alone all of the time i can relate to this poem a lot i know how you feel :)

Its an okay poem that can turn into a great poem. It just needs more time to fully create the image in the reader. :)

The title was interesting and this is so darkly flawless. . it was such a suspend and it defnitely has a dark aura and i love poems like that a lot, and this was awesome..... nicely written Kitty ;)

I really like the idea and theme of this piece. But I feel it was a tad short. After reading, instead of being "Yes, that's right." or "Hm.. she is right", the reader is left confused.

"The lonely screams and taps against my
head"

This seems more like a filler, and it doesn't seem like a good introduction. Plus, it doesn't connect with the next line. I think it's somehow cut short (it's a long line, I know) but it lacks an idea or something that will make it stand; it needs something to hold it steady.

"As I'm exploded with migraines that feel
like needles,"

Okay, this is an okay simile. Needles are okay, a little imagery, but show us more. They connote pain, show us more pain.

"I reach out for comfort but no one seems to be finding me."

See? Instead of emphasizing on that pain, that simile you used, you jumped ship. You changed tone and abandoned that fairly good line.
And 'to be finding me' is grammatically incorrect. '..to find me' shorter, and better. Less is more.

"I'm not understood even though I scream
out my thoughts word for word"

Perhaps the most un-poetic part of the piece. 'I'm not understood..' is grammatically correct but it shifts the tone a bit. Choose your words carefully. And 'word for word' didn't quite fit the atmosphere.

"Because trust issues arise; fears envelop
from past mistakes that keep occurring."

Weak ending. It came out more of a preaching. There was a persona in the beginning, I just wish you've kept the persona until the end, it made the piece more alive.
Don't be discouraged, I see a lot of talent but you need to be more consistent. I'll be checking more of your work, keep writing
-X

Once trust has been broken it is hard to get it back. 5/5