Uor poems r long bt d rhyming part is so gud dat it always makes it easy to read..
Its a sad one..and touched my hrt..

Uor poems r long bt d rhyming part is so gud dat it always makes it easy to read..
Its a sad one..and touched my hrt..

This piece is relatable...I like the imagery in this and the simpleness of your poem. No fancies-- naturally written that pouring ideas as a whole to determine the true feelings of the persona. Well penned:)

Wow. I can so relate to this poem!! Very good. I love it

Stay strong

Awwww sweetie there is always something to live for maybe you just havent met or seen that thing yet. Just stay strong and be your own you.

This was a great poem, really felt the emotion behind it

Very nice written!!!