This is amazing
i love this poem a lot
find nothing to criticize in here

just some funny lines in here like
"None.maybe only God and his crew"
this line was really funny xD 'God and his crew'
part was like lol

"Me,you who is perfect?"
I suggest that you make it

"Who is perfect Me or you?"
a bit changed but reads better(for me)

"Am a fool when am up to the best"
to--for
'for' can be better than 'to' here.

that is it over all this poem is quite good
I enjoyed reading

hope i see more of you soon =)

I didnt see any mistakes..liked it..

My favorite part:

A question i must ask them too Who is perfect me or you? None.maybe only God and his crew For me its easy as can be Just one time and you would see no more of me Am a fool when am up for the best Diming my scope and knawing my nest

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Great poem, very delightful and i loved it :) 5/5

Great. work.... starting was so good...

I will leave for the shore
Sailing as far as i can like the wind
Leaving miles and leagues behind
Then maybe when am gone it would strike you
That i was never black but as harmless as blue

my favorite lines are..

I will leave for the shore
Sailing as far as i--(I)--capitalize this,lol.
can like the wind
Leaving miles and leagues behind
Then maybe when am gone it would strike you
That i was never black but as harmless as blue

I like the ending part. Over all, I enjoy reading your stuff:)keep writing on
-C

When Am Gone will you miss me :( 5/5

Who is perfect me or you?
None.maybe only God and his crew.
Great poem....

Wow, I really liked this.
It's beautifully written, and it flowed well for me.
Keep it up, I'll keep reading. 5.

Jenn

Then maybe when am gone it would strike you
That i was never black but as harmless as blue

I really liked this line, it was so well written. The content of the poem was good and so was the message and how you used your words.