Comments : The first day of the end

  • 12 years ago

    by JustAnotherPoet

    Our baby is struggling inside my tummy,
    I can't protect my baby as its mummy,
    He yells and screams and holds me tight,
    I can't get away now its a single mans fight,

    ~ When I read this part, I was literally muttering to myself, 'the bastard'. This is really good.

    A scared, sick wife with a lot of regret,
    How would my life be had we never met,

    ~ Awww... I can feel for you here. The emotions are very raw and genuine. This poem seems to be a long-suppressed cry from your heart. Nice poem!

    • 12 years ago

      by Samantha

      Thank You Very Much, very hard time in my life.