Awww... this is really sad. I can honestly feel for your pain.

This is a great sad and emotional piece. I love the way you input those refrains with question marks,it makes real. Keep writing and you're welcome onboard.

I also think this is well written!

And as weird as it sounds, nicely formatted!

"I can feel your true love for him. We have the power to love someone truly, but we don't have the power to get true love.- this is destiny".