I can really relate to this poem very emotional this kind of like me you never new that i was shy :)

Wow this poem i can see the sadness and the parts are soo beautiful you trully made a poem that i can relate to sweety my favorite part is :
Although you broke my heart and took every last shard,
you're the only thing that makes me happy.

nice job 5/5

But I can't let you go! No, that'd be too hard!
And forgive me if this may sound sappy:
Although you broke my heart and took every last shard,
you're the only thing that makes me happy.

No it is not sappy nor corny nor cheesy. It is genuinely and heart-breakingly true. The people you love tend to hurt you most because they are the ones you care about. 5/5!

Awww now one of my favorites

"Although you broke my heart and took every last shard,
you're the only thing that makes me happy."

-- love this line, can really relate. 5/5

This is a beautiful poem sad and true. I love a poem that can show alot emotion And this is one of them :)

Its a very pretty poem (:
good job
5/5

I love ittttt

I love ittttt