Piece of Art

by Sunshine   May 16, 2012


Write me like a poem
that the world will read,
like inspirational words
life changing vows,
like a word of truth
or an oath of love.

Write me, like something
to be remembered,
like birds that can soar,
seasons, rain,
write me like a hurricane,
or an angel of light
with an unforgettable name.

I'll be your piece of art,
draw me as the invisible
end of the sea,
the highest branch of
an evergreen tree,
shiniest ray of the sun,
draw me with black and white,
draw me like I'm gone...

but know that I'll be your memory.

by: Rania Moallem

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  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    The author of this fantastic beauty has designed a powerful, poetic painting.

    The title is so beautiful for I feel that poetry is an elegant art... love the title.

    I adore the first stanza, with its richness and creative forms of expressions- very romantic. The starting line;

    "Write me like a poem" <--------- Mouth dropping and passionate start to this poem.

    The nature tones are so beautiful- The author in my opinion is asking for someone to write of her aura and beauty or memory of; I can't express how exquisite the second stanza is..

    The touching and powerful ending is just magical- Asking a lost love to write and create art in her memory- Mercy! This truly is a piece of art.

    The entire poem from start to finish is an elegant painting of emotions, mixed with a beautiful display of words. Well done Ms Sunshine

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Of course I loved this.. so much.. but I think there are poems that you have there that should win, too :)

    Your Arabic version is awesomer that this, by soooooo much! <3

    Keep writing, please

    • 12 years ago

      by Sunshine

      Awwwww thnk you Aboudie ! <3 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    You're words are simply endearing and beautiful. I love your poems Nana, you're marvelous. Remain blessed dear, :-) ...

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Woo Hoo!!! Congratulations on your awesome win!!!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Jeff Weiner

    How cool and true.... well worded

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