My Grieving Mother

Krystal,
This is so touching. it stands out alot. this is my first time to this site, and reading yours is so interesting. u write with such passion and truth. keep on writing and have hope in the end.
-LaceyJ

My mum lost my baby brother when I was seven and she was always sleeping, crying or taking it out on me. It eventually turned into abuse towards me. I was very young but I still understood what was happening but I couldn't understand how this tiny baby could just die. It's a difficult situation that you're in but you wrote about it very well. The emotion was just pouring out of this write. It is amazing. Brilliant use of wording and flawless flow. Thanks for the comment.

Danika.

Krystal this is a very hard subject to write about but you do it with grace and with beauty on such a difficult matter. Your pleading is so heartfelt and agonizing it makes the reader take pause and reflect on how to help if we can. Really good work. I lost my Dad not but 2 years ago and I am still dealing with that. I cannot imagine losing a brother as well. Keep your chin up and keep writing, it will be a way of healing for you.

Krystal....this is one epic write, it is hard to write when these emotions are swimming aroud in our heads sometimes, but sometimes you'll find that it can actually help us order thing a little, this type of loss is the hardest, i know, ive walked this road, dagmars advise is sound (she is almost always right!) i hope to see more from your KB you have great technique xx

Absolutely loved this!! So sad but this does happen.
Your writing is superb Krystal! Write more!!!
Hope things work out for you well.