Oh, this breaks my heart. :( i've lost my mother, and i've seen my dad grieve like this... but after time, he slowly got to be himself again, he still grieves... as do i. just have to take each day at a time. so sorry for your loss. great poem to express your sympathy and feelings though. 5/5

This is an amazing poem! its full of emotion. Ive never lost anyone close to me to death so I cant imagine how hard it is for you and your mom and actually your whole family. Im so sorry and i Really hopes things get better. :)

Oh,it's so sadden and i feel your pain. But know this that whenever something of this your situation happens,it is only the GREAT CONSOLER,GOD, who can help.I sympathize with you,my comrade. Extend my greetings to your mum.Moreover,great piece,it suits its purpose.Keep writing!

The pain of loss will never disappear but it will become easier to bear as time goes by. I know from my own experience that this is true. Still, it affects people in different ways. You and your mum need each other. It must not have been easy expressing your feelings in this way to so many people.
I like your poem.

This is very meaningful, so much emotions and heartfelt glow, I realyl enjoyed it, great job

Thhis is a sad and heartbreaking poem.
When someone is griefing, often we forget
the ones around us, not realizing they are
hurting as well. Let her know, you dealing with a loss and its affecting you just as bad
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This is such an amazing poem, something that I can relate to 100% after loosing my sister and my grandfather my mum has just never been the same. It's very hard to help someone when you have issues of your own. But it will get easier, just try and be there for each other x

Amazing poem!

I hope all will turn out for better and that your mom finds a way to express her sorrow.
I see you found yours.

5/5

Absolutely loved this!! So sad but this does happen.
Your writing is superb Krystal! Write more!!!
Hope things work out for you well.

Krystal....this is one epic write, it is hard to write when these emotions are swimming aroud in our heads sometimes, but sometimes you'll find that it can actually help us order thing a little, this type of loss is the hardest, i know, ive walked this road, dagmars advise is sound (she is almost always right!) i hope to see more from your KB you have great technique xx

Krystal this is a very hard subject to write about but you do it with grace and with beauty on such a difficult matter. Your pleading is so heartfelt and agonizing it makes the reader take pause and reflect on how to help if we can. Really good work. I lost my Dad not but 2 years ago and I am still dealing with that. I cannot imagine losing a brother as well. Keep your chin up and keep writing, it will be a way of healing for you.

My mum lost my baby brother when I was seven and she was always sleeping, crying or taking it out on me. It eventually turned into abuse towards me. I was very young but I still understood what was happening but I couldn't understand how this tiny baby could just die. It's a difficult situation that you're in but you wrote about it very well. The emotion was just pouring out of this write. It is amazing. Brilliant use of wording and flawless flow. Thanks for the comment.

Danika.

Krystal,
This is so touching. it stands out alot. this is my first time to this site, and reading yours is so interesting. u write with such passion and truth. keep on writing and have hope in the end.
-LaceyJ