I Love how you're not afraid to write from your heart on certain subjects others may find the need to hide or cover over a bit cos when people do that some of the power is lost as well. I think you are a strong talented writer with a poetic voice as big as the ocean, and you are not afraid to use it.
The poem was raw honesty penned in a heart grabbing kind of way...It pulls you in without boring you and finishes with a perfect ending.