Not so bad is it?

by echo uniform gulf echo november echo   May 16, 2012


Blue sky's, the wind blowing the trees making the shadows dance
Thoughts and memories lay track in my mind
Sweet smells of honeysuckle and roses play
Not wanting to think or feel anything real
Warm breezes and birds crowing fill the air
Remind me again what is so wrong in life

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  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    "skies" instead of "sky's".

    I like the imagery. It works really well and paints a beautiful and tender image of a world that many people see as bad.

    I like the idea of the poem. Giving the positive and the beauty in something that is bigger than us all. In a world with so much going on and where the negative outweighs the good.

    Nice.

  • 12 years ago

    by Akerele1 Segun22

    This is a powerful piece,my comrade. Keep it up!

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