Comments : Fam(ily)

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Sooner or later, the things
    you love in life you loose.

    ^ I know you meany lose here, just wanted to point out a typo

    Yaki this so freakin sad I was teary eyed this whole entire read....growing up and getting old and living with a fear of dieing or others we love dieing soon absolutely sucks and I can't stand it.

    I just loved the part about cookies and ice cream and not tasting as good alone....thats the best part of a mother, or father, or even sibling. Their company. Even when it comes down to eating snacks.

    This was a great write filled with such intense pain that even I could feel it.. Loved the title and the (ily) very creative.

    • 12 years ago

      by Yakari Gabriel

      This was about my Dog tho, she died somewhere midnight.. I knew she wouldn't hold on till this morning!

      she was a yunkie who loved everything sweet. meeh </3