Why?

by Jose   May 17, 2012


19 years old still living in this world
feels like when i was first born blind
a clear mind
talking to a ghost on the side
why em i not like the rest of mankind?
you said you don't help thoes who don't help themselves
ive done what i can
been drought dawn
got right back up continue to run
but now its hard
give me your helping hand
make me truly understand
before i reach your holy land
i don't mean any disrespect but this world is a living hell
is it hard for you to tell?
this is the year twenty-twelve
not much longer oh well!

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jose

    Thanks!

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Very nice poem :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jose

    Thanks.

    i don't think so but we'll see.

  • 12 years ago

    by Loosened Locks

    I don't mean any disrespect but this world is a living hell

    I like this line - the entire poem - an the idea of having a one-on-one with the BigMan upstairs. o.o

    Questioning certain aspects of faith without losing it, is better than having blind faith in my opinion, but stay strong!

    P.s. you really think it's the end of the world? ;)

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