Comments : Ready to fly

  • 12 years ago

    by Loosened Locks

    If I could fly I would be free

    I've thought that same thing.....wouldn't that be nice :/

    If only if only >.>

  • 12 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Blew . . . me . . . a . . . way . . . to . . . a . . . different . . . land
    blew . . . me . . . away . . . to a different land

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    You've seen me run you've seen me cry
    You've seen how I look up at the sky
    If I could fly I would be free
    Free of the life that holds me

    Nice starting part. I like the way you worded it and I enjoy reading your piece:))
    Keep up the good work",