Looking into eyes

by Kelwin lost in thought   May 17, 2012


When I look into your eyes I see pain.
when you look into mine you see fear.
you wounder who I am?
I see who you trully are.
you can tell alot about someone from there eyes.
if they are afraid or living in fear.
if they love or hate.
if they care or not.
how they feel.
who they are.
so look into my eyes.
what do you see?
do you see me?
do you see what you want to see?
do you see what you believe?
so please tell me.
what do you see?

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I like it, it has alot of questionable sentences, but you can totally get what you are trying to say

  • 12 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    As Donia i think this poem needs ALOT OF HELP as Alexandria what Donia says goes sweety sorry but she's right babe and as Anastasia i think this poem does have meaning and imagery but i wonder are my sisters correct? i do see the poem but i also see holes in this poem but like you once told Ash you don't want help just comments so it's all said and done sweety

More Poems By Kelwin lost in thought