As Donia i think this poem needs ALOT OF HELP as Alexandria what Donia says goes sweety sorry but she's right babe and as Anastasia i think this poem does have meaning and imagery but i wonder are my sisters correct? i do see the poem but i also see holes in this poem but like you once told Ash you don't want help just comments so it's all said and done sweety

I like it, it has alot of questionable sentences, but you can totally get what you are trying to say