Okay right off the bat I must say wow and there is one thing I would change.

'Do you I'm a total softy
I hate how much you control me'

I would change the first line to 'You know I am a total softy' that way it can flow more with the poem.

For the poem itself; wow you blew me away again. I love how you were writing about a true friend who you can do anything with. Yes it would be hard to lose any friend and I can see that with you poem. I feel like I am there laughing and telling this person how I feel about them. The imagery is great. Every friendship feels magical and with we lost it, it would disappear forever. Friendships can over come anything really and I can see your friends mean the most to you wonderful 5/5