Nerves

by sun spots   May 18, 2012


Was i nervous,
you bet your life.
Lastnight you told me,
you would be my wife.
I had an idea what you would say,
but i had to hear it in this way.
Looking me in the eye,
you said those words.
I felt so high,
and i later asked you to repeat.
Twice more those words so sweet,
and let them slowly sink on in.
Our life together can now begin.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Aw, this is so sweet! you usually don't hear from the male's point of view, it's usually the women's joy of being asked. love it. 5/5 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Awwwww that's sooo cute! gosh it's something that i think i would love to hear one day when i'm already married for years to know that my husband was worried lol so it's a great poem! ;) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by sun spots

    Yes, the dust will settle, we have to be strong once that dust cloud kicks up. XX

  • 12 years ago

    by sun spots

    It sure can. Lots to look forward to once the dust has settled x

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