Saucy

by Maple Tree   May 18, 2012


Thoughts have lingered across my
dinner table a thousand times
this evening,
as I gaze upon my plate of spaghetti,
I can't help but fondle a lonely noodle
that has been abandoned-

Naughty intentions scatter within my
feverish brain,
as I look into your eyes-

I'm not interested in food tonight,
just you....

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  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love this! It's amazing that you have felt that you had this connection with the string of pasta that was alone on the plate, as if you knew what this pasta was feeling. Personifying it bringing together an awesome love poem.

    x

  • 13 years ago

    by Blissful

    You go girl!

    I loved the title, fit in perfectly with your poem!

    Who needs spaghetti if your appetite calls for something sweeter ;)

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    Haha Andrea... such a smart, cute, defined write!

    love it

  • 13 years ago

    by nouriguess

    The ending... you beast!

  • 13 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Well this made me chuckle since you painted the scenery so well in my mind..... So vivid! lmaooo! We got some saucyyy girls here on PnQ indeed! Hahah cheeky write!

    The ending's parents must've been terrorist cause it was

    The bomb! Xoxoxo

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