by Kips2.0 May 18, 2012
category :
Life, society /
other
So many times I'm forced to ask 'why?' |
I like this a lot! I enjoyed the fact that you weren't tied to one narrow minded idea, but that you brought in several different struggles we all go through. Good Job! |
by lillie
I like this poem :) very thoughtful and thoughrough I believe almost everyone can relate |
by Yrem Crish
Well, in some parts of your poem I am relate from this... |