Detailed murder

by ninjamonkey   May 18, 2012


As I feel the blade run across my wind pipe
It hurts and i can't breath
All i hear is gargaling as I fall
I see people standing around me
I see the guy that ended it all
As the world starts to fade
I turn and say thank you
Then the world goes black
All i feel is cold no more pain
As I step into the black abyss
I start thinking here I come
I'm comming home now and forever
No more pain no more heart breaks
Just emptyness

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  • 12 years ago

    by Dominique Lewis

    Wow Jesse. That made me cry sweetie. I hope you don't feel like that anymore. If something is bothering you feel free to talk to me about it. Love you bestie. :) <3 5/5 from me.

  • 12 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Great write 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Georgia

    Wow this was really really good. An intersting write !! I love it 5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I can really relate to this poem alot i used to cut myself i know to feel the pain when you first cut yourself i can feel this poem very touching and filled with emotion i getting teared up readiing this poem :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Well written

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