Right on

by sun spots   May 18, 2012


Should i stop or carry on,
i have the girl I've finally won.
Why carry on and write,
does it still feel right.

It feels better than before,
i will carry on and write even more.
As long as she still loves me,
i will write poems for her gladly.

I don't think I'll ever stop,
i will keep on going till i drop.
My love for her will drive me on,
Its something brighter than the sun.

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  • 12 years ago

    by sun spots

    I will carry on for you sweetheart.XX

  • 12 years ago

    by sun spots

    Yes please carry on. I love reading your thoughts x

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Don't stop writing now

  • 12 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Awwww soo cute! :) that's love for you! :) 5/5