I am usually lazy in reading a long poem but this one intrigues me..a lot maybe because of the title or the peculiarity of the content, I don't know. When I read about the message of this poem I feel sympathy for you. Sorry for the lost of his life. I'm hoping that he is on the right hand now...and about the poem, though it was written in long clouded content but my interest not faded. I feel sad with the story--and found out that he end his life by suicide. I am not fond for knowing about people who usually kill their-selves or attempting suicide when the things go wrong....I am a positive person so I take life positively. Life is only one so, we should take care of it like treasure.
Anyways, this piece is nicely written.
Keep up the good work always:)