Forbidden Love

Mmmmm... that's a nice poem, I love the way you used the rhymes and the words. How I wish I have telent like you do :)

hi trincy =) voted again in here hahaha well thanx for reading my stuffs and commentin on em =) not gonna delete ur comment on the other one thou =) i wrote that poem around 4am =) haha thats why my mind kinda tired =) but ima try to edit that one tonight =) since im in the mood to write =) and the translation for te amo mi amor, its like saying i love you to ur love one in spanish =) coz te amo = i love u and mi amor = my love =) ciao trincy =) i would love u to visit my site again =) i wrote another poem =) and needs an honest critisizm =) muah... again thank u =) much love !!!

tish =)

gave it a 5 =) hope u pass by mine and read =) have one simalar to this titled "souljah of my love" =) thank u =)

First I want to say thank you for all your comments, and secondly, you are great!! I loved it, as I do all your poems, Keep them coming =0) 5 all the way