hey aww that was really cute, you don't need luck rhymes come from the heart, you have to write a poem about feelings and all. keep writing though!

that was so adorable. i bet when u wrote this you didnt expect people to say it was cute. lol ashleys right. poems dont have to rhyme. just write what you feel in ur heart. put it down on paper. it does have to rhyme. or even make sense. just write what u feel. i hope u find ur good luck charm. ill be waiting to see if you write something else

YOU ARE VERY GOOD FOR YOUR AGE, AND RHYMING ISNT EVERYTHING. THERE MANY GREAT POEMS THAT DONT RHYME AT ALL. BUT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, AS LONG AS YOU STAY TRUE TO YOUR HEART NONE OF YOUR RHYMES WILL FALL APART=)

Lol gosh tyler ur good at writing stop putting urself doqn damnit i will step on u if u dont :]