by Hannah Lizette May 19, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Jet black hair, |
So many people would love a poem like this for a wedding |
Oh this is a cute little piece! I particularly love the end verse. It flowed very nicely and had lovely rhyme. |
by average thoughts
Short and sweet..and rhyming and flow ws perfct..grt work hannah.. |
Thank you! :) |
by BlueJay
A very simple piece, but I enjoyed it a lot. It was a refreshing piece, yet had some "taste" to it if you will. I love the descriptions and the voice wrapped up in the light cheerful tone; excellent. |
Thanks! |
by Yrem Crish
I love this piece..so amazing and awesome imagery. Really impressing..keep writing:)) |
Thanks!! |