I love the personification of the rose, but the point of views was a little messy.
Ex:
"My arms sway like a willow tree,
in the cool summer breeze."
---the narrator is the rose
"My beautiful red rose,
the scent was so sweet,"
---the narrator is telling about the rose
"My life span was short,
but maybe had purpose."
---then the narrator becomes the rose again.

A little revision and polishing would make this poem better. But I really like the theme and idea behind this. A rose is over-used in poetry, but still, you made it work here. Great job, Hannah. Keep writing :)
-X

This was very beautiful. really painted a picture. your a talented writer

Hannah-

Many times I often refer to myself as a droopy flower.... For when sorrow and life challenges overcome my senses I truly feel as such-

I adore this piece, for it touches on a part of ones life that i feel happens to everyone from time to time...

You have penned a beautiful poem here... I also admire the nature tones .... just love this!!!!!!!!!

I love the flow of this poem :) 5/5

Oh this is so beautiful and so sad.
Just remember, no matter how down you are you can always rise again, to be that beautiful rose once more.

Beautiful imagery here. 5/5