by White Orchid May 19, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Serenate me with your song |
This was so ellegantly written. Beautiful job girl! I can tell you really thought this out. ^_^ |
by Moonlit Candles
I thought this was a great acrostic. I liked how you incorporated the actual lullabies here. All in all it was a great job. :) |
by Amy
Beautiful write! Great flow and great rhymes. Keep up the good work. 5/5 |