by Nobody cares May 19, 2012
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
The devil sweet. |
by JaM
I really enjoyed this poem, the last line took me by a wonderful surprise. I was not expecting it to finish that way, well done :) |
That was an interesting piece of work...you have certainly stumped me with your originality in this. The concept is striking and unusual. But, that was what you intended, wasn't it...lol. I see your other work gets reviewed but this one threw some for a loop. Well done! |