Comments : Right words

  • 13 years ago

    by Reaper

    I feel this poem Good Job :) 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I enjoyed reading this, very well down, I love your writing, this has amazing style, and the flow is outstanding, another good job

    • 13 years ago

      by Faith Ann

      Sorry it took me a little bit to respond to you. your comment slipped right past me. lol but aww thank you so much. Im glad you enjoy my writing!:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Unknown

    So, i belting this out like it was song lyrics in my head as i was reading, lol. it may just be me? it had a nice rhythm to it, maybe 'cause it repeats the "i do, i do, i do" and says baby a few times. anyway, i'm rambling... this is a nice poem! love the flow. 5/5 :)

    • 13 years ago

      by Faith Ann

      :) haha thank you very much

  • 13 years ago

    by KRYSTAL B

    I LIKE IT

    • 13 years ago

      by Faith Ann

      I accidently hit remove and not reply so if ur comment gets deleted im very sorry i jus wanted to say thanks!:)