This was a great poem. It reminded me of don't worry what you look like. Your fine just the way you are. Sometimes we get caught up in the moment and don't realize we just need to be ourselves. Great write. :)

I agree with Moonlit, not to get caught up in the appearance and just be yourself, that is exactly the message I got from reading this poem as well.

I would change fogs to fog, though. It tripped me up when the rest of the piece flowed quite naturally. :) Beautifully written!

A wonderful message. people are so caught up on looks nowadays that they don't stop to actually get to know a person.

this is very well written, great job. 5/5 :)