When it was us

by kate   May 21, 2012


When im around you every thing changes,
when i met you i thought it was real,
but when we broke apart i died as my love faded away,
you made me so happy but as you left for some one else i was sad,
not the very first time you done it but it hurt more than before,
also as you spoke the words i didnt think i'd ever hear again,
but now it's a blur of the past and nothing matters any more,
but the thing that still has me thinking of you,
is that i still have that love i once had for you.

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  • 12 years ago

    by kate

    Yeauh thank you very much, yeah i had written this when i was feeling down and that had happend and im sorry and thanks once again. hope you find some one good i really do.

  • 12 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I love this, great job, I feel your pain, I almost cried about my ex boyfriend when I read this, I still love him, and I still think our love is real, but he doesn't, it hurts like a painful death, great job, you really brought out my feelings, a favorite, 100/100

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Very sad poem :( 5/5

    • 12 years ago

      by kate

      Yeah

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