Great one Joseph! You are doing well!!

Staring at you can be my leisure
For thy beauty pain would be my pleasure
Your worth is more than any earthly treasure
My love for you has no bounds and no measure
That's my favourite part.. This poem is just great...

I'm not sure everything went together but its romantic and sweet,,quite beautiful to the touch,,I loved and enjoyed reading ur poem :)

My favorite part:

Well actually I loved it all :)

WOW. Great poem. I really enjoy reading from this piece..keep writing, Joseph:))

It was good, very romantic. :)
Good visuals.

Keep it up.
Jenn

Well penned joseph..

I would touch the sun and burn my soul
And when am dead i would still be bold
Death would be sweet and even just for you
As i taunt it fearlessly like a bullfighter and his bull

I liked this stanza. I felt the ryhming in stanza 1 were kinda forced. A poem doesnt necessarily have to rhyme but apart from that, saw no problem with it and you have written another amazing poem that i really liked. The emotions you convey are wonderful and so are the words you have used. This is really a beautiful love poem.