Comments : Beginning

  • 12 years ago

    by Georgia

    I really like this ^_^

  • 12 years ago

    by Alanis

    I love this, I can relate to it. Ur all went into thiS poem sparing no emotion or fear. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by kraziibeautiful

    "They come to me in the night
    Everything in the day i tried to fight".
    This has soo much meaning. I especially know what it feels like to preoccupy yourself with things during the day...but as soon as its time for sleep to, you can't help but think about...
    Anyways I love this poem. Your emotions here are expressed well.

  • 12 years ago

    by kraziibeautiful

    "They come to me in the night
    Everything in the day i tried to fight".
    This has soo much meaning. I especially know what it feels like to preoccupy yourself with things during the day...but as soon as its time for sleep to, you can't help but think about...
    Anyways I love this poem. Your emotions here are expressed well.