Lily(Haiku)

by Jad   May 21, 2012


Splashes of yellow,
dancing along in splendor
come alive this spring.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Simplistic as a haiku should be. Beautiful. Spring is very vibrant & lovely. Has to be one of the best seasons. Nice job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh mercy what a pretty Haiku! Just lovely!!

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    I absolutely LOVE this!

    You just reminded me of a visit that was incredibly fantastic. There were those tiny aligned yellowish things dancing with the freshing breeze and just painting an awesome imagery in my head!

    I loved how you went simple. Awesome how we can imagine such stuff by reading such a simple haiku. Very well-done, Austin!

  • 12 years ago

    by yogi73

    Nice! I love a good haiku

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    All the reader has to do is shut their eyes and there are those splashes of yellow dancing. Glad to see you writing.