by hope May 22, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Crimson teardrops fall rom a torn open scar, skin so bruised she couldn't walk very far. |
Great flow throughout the whole poem, the only thing i seen wrong was on the first line you have "rom" and it should be "from" lol. no biggie... just thought i'd point it out to you to edit. a wonderful poem. 5/5 :) |