Comments : Part of the Game.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nice to see you post a poem after such a long time. Cindy will be sorry she has missed it. It does seem that all things are repeats and are part of life's game. Very nice read.

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Steven!! I use to read your work like 6 years ago!! So good to see your writing again! Keep it up!

    Loved the idea behind this piece :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I love your poem...as it is so relatable to us humans. Life is indeed a game and we are the players in it. A touching write, very well penned :)

    Keep the ink flowing Steve! :D

  • So very true.
    I am sure every person has thought about this: the what ifs? But why bother, when we have made our choices and are now in the present unable to turn back time in order to change our path.
    Very well penned! Hope to read more from you.

    Alisha

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Life is a gamble
    if we don't play, we can't win
    if we could go back in time
    would we do things different?Who knows

    this piece reminds me of a poem I wrote
    a while back If only I could go back in time