Star Gazing

by Kitty Kurse   May 22, 2012


Catch me within lovely wings of gratitude,
Surround me with tender love and passionate kisses on thy neck.
Consume thy sadness and tears; lead me,
From darkness and temptation-
Wind whispers sweet songs of worry free futures as I'm side by side combined,
Our hands; space free intertwined.

Star gazing; we are sharing life's natural beauties,
One that shines brighter than the sun rise-
Seen within the first few hours of morning.
Oh what a wonderful glory.

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  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Beautiful ... had me gazing at the stars

    really talented

    • 12 years ago

      by Kitty Kurse

      Thank you, Thank you all the commets really are keeping me writing here. Sometimes I feel like giving up everything! but you guys keep me writing.

  • 12 years ago

    by ArtistrySoul

    Nice short piece and the imagery conveyed within this poem, well done :)

  • 12 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Captivating words, describing a shared moment of beauty with someone you love, I enjoyed this poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    ^^
    i agree with Chels I also like the imagery and metaphors:)
    Good job

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This was absolutely beautiful. great imagery and metaphors. Your last 3 lines were a great ending! :) Good write~

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