Love the picture you painted... very nice poem. 5/5 |
by Chelsey
This was absolutely beautiful. great imagery and metaphors. Your last 3 lines were a great ending! :) Good write~ |
by Ms Happiness
^^ |
by East Poetry
Captivating words, describing a shared moment of beauty with someone you love, I enjoyed this poem. |
by ArtistrySoul
Nice short piece and the imagery conveyed within this poem, well done :) |
Beautiful ... had me gazing at the stars |
by Kitty Kurse
Thank you, Thank you all the commets really are keeping me writing here. Sometimes I feel like giving up everything! but you guys keep me writing. |