Blue is your breathtaking eyes,
my heart is yours,
tied with a concrete block,
sinking into sapphire lakes

^^ This was my favorite part! I great analogy!!

My rainbow,
so vibrant and magical,
you shimmer after darkness,
no clouds can overcome you.

^ I love the comparison of the person to a rainbow! That was a beautiful ending!

I agree with chelsey, I certainly did love
the ending 5/5

That gave me chills! very adorable 5/5 :))

Thanks! this is my new favorite of my bunch, so i'm glad people like it too! haha. :)

Can I say this poem as sweet and romantic? Or just love the rainbow you described in the content of poem. I love the way you write from the beginning to the last part. Really enjoyable piece. Great job:))
~C

This is a beautiful piece. Love how you've related each colour to a memory or element of your love. Didnt know what to expect when I opened the piece, but it was better than I could've hoped.

I must agree with other readers.. The ending was amazing. 5/5

Oh I love this! I adore rainbows so again it was your title that drew me in but I was shocked as was not expecting this. Such a beautiful poem and wonderful idea. It would be interesting to see what other people came up with for the colours.

this is my favourite of yours so far that I have read xx