Romeo

by Kumar kainth   May 22, 2012


Oh My dear I am not a Shakespeare,
Neither am a Romeo nor you are my Juliet who sat & compose lines furious,
if u don't get this sound, treasure is mare a sand
raise your hand want to be your best friend
I wonder to become a lover, I like to be as a realistic star, I dig in my heart now found a start

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  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    The idea is good
    but result is a bit too rough
    With some small adjustments this could be an excellent poem

    Keep it up!

    4/5

    • 12 years ago

      by Kumar kainth

      This is bracelet type, each line is from separate poem, it is tricky one,

      i did'nt post all my poem here, small adjustment is required, as you said, am working on it, soon i am posting all my poems

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    This poem conveys a good message, Deepak. But some parts are rough and abstruse to understand. I can sense that behind this piece drapes with a lovely thoughts to the person you mean in this poem. Well, I've enjoy reading this. Keep up the good work and keep writing more:))
    ~C

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