Comments : Progressionary circumstance.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    But my love by your side?
    Was always a big waste of your time.
    ^^^
    those last two lines touched me a lot. Sad poem, but well written:)

  • 12 years ago

    by rock serenade

    Oh man it's soo emotional liked it

    Carry my love as a token if at all;
    It'll be huddled in the mud...
    or under your feet as you walk,

    But my love by your side?
    Was always a big waste of your time.

    this was my favorite part ...:)

    5/5