Comments : I'll Never

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I feel your pain and dissapointment
    Perhaps its the wrong timing, or don't work
    to hard towards it. Believe, me, it happens
    when the least expected. It is going to happen, maybe not right now but it will.
    5/5

    • 12 years ago

      by Hannah Lizette

      Thanks, it is very disappointing. for a long time i put it in the back of my mind and tried not to worry about it, but it seems to creep up on me sometimes.

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Very sad poem :( 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Phase

    Awwwh!! Oh my gosh, how heartbreaking! There has to be some reason, hon, when the time is right, one day it really will happen - but I am so sorry for this. Very touching and sad poem :(

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    This is a fear of mine as well and I definitely understand that fear. It will happen when it's supposed to. Focus on being engaged and getting married (thats stressful enough lol) and enjoy the time you have together now. Babies will come when you least expect it!

    • 12 years ago

      by Hannah Lizette

      Thanks, and yeah I agree it'll happen when it's supposed to... God has a reason. It's just disappointing and I worry because of hereditary issues, my mother had lots of problems with conceiving, and didn't have me until she was 39, so it's always been something in the back of my mind.

  • 12 years ago

    by Faith Ann

    :( Im sorry hun. thats depressing. :(

    • 12 years ago

      by Hannah Lizette

      I know, i had a moment today... :( thanks for the comment!

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Things have a time. You will have what you want.

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Very amazing poem :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Solace

    Oh my, I have tears in my eyes! I have always said that the best poems are those that are heartfelt and this is one of them. So simple, yet so powerful. It's never a bad thing to break down and vent. Just keep your head up and keep trying!

  • 12 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    Is it that you are unable to have children for a medical condition or your own thoughts that you wont get the chance because you havent met the right guy?

    Either way, chin up because when theres a will theres a way. You may adopt - though you wony have all the feelings you have described you will at least be able to be a mother. Otherwise, there is still plenty of time for you to find the right guy - and you will. (:

    Poetically, this poem is very heartbreaking. You dont seem to end with a resolution or anything so it seems you have resigned yourself to having no child. As I said above, stay strong. Think positively and all will be okay.
    (:

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    What a very powerful moving poem. It captures such deep heart ache of this situation. You penned this so well it really touches your heart when you read this. I connected to this and I think it can be seen from two sides. It can be seen as not being able to have children and the loss and pain you have to suffer with this. Or, in my eyes it can also be seen as losing a child early on in pregnancy because the poem then turns around to be directed at that child. The loss of that child and what you will never experience with them.

    Amazing job, I am just sorry you had to write this and feel this pain, but hope in some way you found it comforting to write it. x