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  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    This has a PTSD feel to it. The "slain" part makes it seem like that... many innocent people murdered for no particular reason. It is a mess really. And then when they have nothing to gain, it fits really well.

    And then the ending stanza. Everything is in a jumble and messy and confused and it's like a PTSD attack. Nice.

    I like the flow. And the rhyme.