by HiddenScars May 23, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Nobody knows what I really feel inside, |
by Justin
Its always hard to let go of somone you love, reading / writing can really put some thought into your head about the whole situation.. Theres alot of emotions in this poem, but I agree, it was hard to get a real "flow" so to say for the poem.. None the less you did what I think you were trying to do and that was portray emotion.. Great job |
So i love the message here, its full of raw emotion the only thing i would say is that your flow was a little stop and go at times |
by Silent Girl
Very excellent poem i can relate to this poem a lot i know how you feel i can feel your poem hurt and pain i can picture your poem in my head i love the title :) 5/5 |
by Kitty Kurse
"Nobody knows what I really feel inside, |