Comments : I Cannot Tell

  • 12 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    "Nobody knows what I really feel inside,
    'Cause apparently I'm supposed to hate you
    So I can't tell anyone I'm still in love with you too.
    Even thought(though) I know it's bad for me"

    This poem has alot of emotion but I don't really catch on to a flow in it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Very excellent poem i can relate to this poem a lot i know how you feel i can feel your poem hurt and pain i can picture your poem in my head i love the title :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by AnotherPlasticSmile

    So i love the message here, its full of raw emotion the only thing i would say is that your flow was a little stop and go at times

  • 12 years ago

    by Justin

    Its always hard to let go of somone you love, reading / writing can really put some thought into your head about the whole situation.. Theres alot of emotions in this poem, but I agree, it was hard to get a real "flow" so to say for the poem.. None the less you did what I think you were trying to do and that was portray emotion.. Great job